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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Hereafter I'll round up these feelings I have for you, Sequestering them to a weak little memory cell. Then I will drink appropriately just enough So that my heart will spew you in urgent dispel. [This message has been edited by McLean (01-15-2004 11:13 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
McLean~ Oh my ... this is so poignantly stated~ WONDERFUL~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
My goodness, this is going to take some re-reading....so much said, in such a short space. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yep, I understand. Really good one -- oh, if we just could! |
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Maki Riddington Junior Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 10Canada |
Well written. My goal is to be able to say so much with so few words. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
if it works for you, let me know...I gotta try it |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Bravo McLean...well done. You say so much in such a short piece. I can never do this. It always takes me a minimum of 14 lines to get around to the conclusion in any poem I write. (Snicker!) Well 90% of the time. I guess I have written a few 4 line verses. Still this is an incredilbe thing to be able to do. Bravo! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very well done!!! "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Thanks, everyone. I thought for sure this one was going to drift off the blue unseen. My word for this day was "Sequester", which, btw, I could not locate in my paperback edition of Websters. Anyway...I wake with a word or two on the tip of my thought, and use what is offered to form some sort of writing. This just came, in a brief few seconds to me. I like it, too. My word for today: Clandestine, which IS in my Websters. JOIN ME! I'd love for everyone to try a write based on the happenstance of one word.  McLean |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice..tight..and strong.. well done... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Yay, I love this, sweet friend, I really enjoy reading your poetry, dearest friend, even when you dispose, you always gain so much all at once! God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet McLean, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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