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Dust to Dust
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Dust to Dust |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Dust to Dust Most of what has lived with me Has aged to dust or turned to bree Has spent its youth and jewel of prime Within the argosy of time The aches and pains of my December Grays the memories of remember Veils in mist the clear of clear And lengthens the distance of near And smaller grows the buds desire To open up this mind of mire To reach into the cruel of sun And toast within the youth of fun But though I see the vanish bend I cannot say I wish the end For thought each shape shapes contour We have not reached the full mature So I will be a stitch a weave In the total that I believe |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nice stitchin, Sy but I think you're a bit too young to be talkin about turning to dust |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
reminds me of the thoughts in the song dust in the wind sey...and I love this as much as I loved that song too! Well done, morning hon. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling...  Sometimes? You just leave me very quiet...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine I know the feeling. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun I have my moments. Gentle, You are a love. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A very reflective read this cold morn Sy. How about some black currant tea to warm you up?  ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Sounds good to me. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Seytmour you are too young to be thinking about dust and endings. Now me on the other hand...(Wink!) Well done my friend. I love this piece...but then I always love your work. You are the man! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Good Morning Sy! Loved this piece, as I was just trying to convince someone, this last weekend, that I do not want a "Happy 40th" birthday party this year...*sigh* "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
EvocativeVerse2 A friend is a friend is a friend. Thank you Susan, If not happy than peaceful |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ The gentle of you touches the gentle of me~ Thank you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour, I guess we all must live with some sort of "aches and pains".....to remind us that we're still alive. LOL. My bones are complaining to-day what with all of this snow!! Great write as always, toast and honey with your tea? hugs, Chris "When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Then I place a gentle Chris, Thank you dear I'll be right over. |
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