truth fragments - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #30

truth fragments

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-01-13 12:35 PM

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

Effigy
Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

1 posted 2004-01-13 12:55 PM

that was great. i'll have to keep reading your other post. well done

Kristin Eve
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 89
On, Canada

2 posted 2004-01-13 01:16 AM

Wow. That was so simple and powerful. I love it.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2004-01-13 01:28 AM

you are powerful....which is why I enjoy you so much! HUGSSS

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-01-13 03:34 AM

how I love these!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-01-13 10:54 AM

LadySnow~

This is just poignancy at it's finest ... and the marriage of thought and graphic -
STUNNING~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

stevebrklynnyc
Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 292
GA, Camden

6 posted 2004-01-13 06:02 PM

I know I am new at this, but it was really good. I have a good tutor helping me out!

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.