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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Droplets from thy tearful eye falleth to the ground, Dispelled by thy moon shaped spheres of heavenly brown. The child cries inside for thy yesterday’s youth, But that time has towered to a never ending truth. Thy broken heart spills into an oval essence tear, This one I shall call it my own and keep it forever near. I know thy lands are swallowed in shallow gloom, But an oval tear can find its way around a darkened moon. For you see oval tears have a special meaning in life, They bend light as a beacon to summon the stars in the night, Call upon the heavens to aid against your dire dreams, And replace the grayness with an ever essence gleam. Made of gold they bind thy nightmares in chains, And carry it wayward through an asteroid belts rain. So when you dispel an oval tear remember to smile, For the adult that you now see is comforted much like that child. [This message has been edited by Ravenwolfvoyager (01-12-2004 10:48 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thy broken heart spills into an oval essence tear love the poem..and that phrase "into an oval essence tear..." M |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Caught in my baseball cap...and treasured This is an absolute smile from the center to top of the sky. Bravo! TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"For you see oval tears have a special meaning in life, They bend light as a beacon to summon the stars in the night," Really lovely. |
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Serra_Avatar Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 58 |
Chicken soup for the soul |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is absolutely incredible writing! |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Mystical, magical RWV...you truly are from another realm, aren't you? Thank you for bringing your beauty and glory into our world. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ravenwolfvoyager Well you caught me in your web this morning. Excellent write. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful and lyrical...perfect! Eric |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeff~ The beauty of your thoughts permeate this penning~  'Thy broken heart spills into an oval essence tear, This one I shall call it my own and keep it forever near.' Poignant ! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
For you see oval tears have a special meaning in life, They bend light as a beacon to summon the stars in the night, Call upon the heavens to aid against your dire dreams, And replace the grayness with an ever essence gleam. I knew from the title that this would be good... What a beautiful tale you've told... I'll have to examine tears more closely. *S* |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
RWV: I came back for more oval essence. Truly beautiful. TD |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Jeff This was truly a most captivating piece of writing and so very beautifully written. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Kristin Eve Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 89On, Canada |
this poem made me cry!  "Who you are speaks so loudly...I can hardly hear what you are saying" |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Haunting....the longer I wear this poem, the more it melds with my skin. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Droplets from thy tearful eye falleth to the ground, Dispelled by thy moon shaped spheres of heavenly brown. The child cries inside for thy yesterday’s youth, But that time has towered to a never ending truth. RWV, I so enjoy your insight and perspective. What a great writer you are!! Take your bows Sir! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
For you see oval tears have a special meaning in life, They bend light as a beacon to summon the stars in the night, Call upon the heavens to aid against your dire dreams, And replace the grayness with an ever essence gleam. Oh my, Jeff, you have outdone yourself with this beautiful poem. I'm keeping it so that I can find this outstanding treasure when I want to read it again. My goodness, Sir, you have talent beyond measure!! Thank you, my friend, for sharing your poetry with us. Hugs Ethel |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Sorry, I must have missed this one before.. Now that I know the story behind it...I sit here in more awe of you, More ovals are dropping from my eyes form the beauty of your words, the soul of your words speak to me, touching my heart with joy! Irionic how a poem about tears, brings more tears~ but this time the tears are happy! Thank You!!!!!!!!!!  You are truely wonderful! WOW! ~ARH Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, dearest friend, I believe it is a strength to cry and every man should cry to show his emotions and that he stands up and feels for his loved ones! (big angel hugs) Yay, you have the starlight in your hearts tears, sweet friend, always hold the child in you close, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jeff...You have the ability to touch to the core, a feeling...and release it like a song...and that's pretty amazing! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sigh....a tender comfort to read. I love this style..oh yeah I said that before...but you do it so darn well. You are such a talent and kind soul, thank you for sharing with us. It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeff~ Hoping you will come back to grace these blue halls with some more lovely poetic verse~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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