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j0n4th4n
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since 2003-03-11
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0 posted 2004-01-12 01:14 PM


Open, open your mouth
while we kiss. Take me
in with wet breaths
and kisses. Eat my passion
and absorb it with your
eyes; don't hurry, don't
be slow, take care only
to not hold yourself
back; do not feel encumbered.

You, who had accepted
my invitations, I now
speak clearly to your fine
ear. You, who had kissed
me in gentleness, now kiss
me with fire!

I keep your face in a cupboard
in my mind, in a suitcase
in my heart. Let your face
merge with mine
when we meet,
taking me where I
can't breathe without
taking in some of you.

I spent years, and years,
without you, all of my life.
Now be with me,
let me take you alive,
but may you take, envelope,
me also.


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Terrina
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since 2003-12-31
Posts 166
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1 posted 2004-01-12 01:33 PM


Someone is in for it;-) I like this a lot. Passionate for sure
Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2004-01-12 02:43 PM


taking me where I
can't breathe without
taking in some of you.


mmmmhmmmm
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
3 posted 2004-01-12 03:44 PM


Heartfelt and well done.
Welcome to Passions.
ThisDiamond

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-01-12 03:49 PM


I love the feeling, the imagery, the imagination the desire to expand words and the mind.

Yes I like it a lot

Dave

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-01-12 07:04 PM


Very expressive...James
iliana
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USA
6 posted 2004-01-12 11:34 PM


Woooooeeee!  Lot of energy here!!  And, how will you top this for Valentine's Day???
j0n4th4n
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since 2003-03-11
Posts 94

7 posted 2004-01-19 04:34 PM


thank you all for your encouragement!

i apologise for not commenting very much on the forums, instead mostly writing. i'll lokke out for your works.

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