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talking headstrong winds |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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fingers four walk dawdling I concede and milk the feed of internal plot of me ain't there yet I lose regret walking spot to spot in street head down contemplating cracks how absurd it all must be still I tred them carefully-- m'mama's back, already bent. Take the yoke of my badthinks-- I'll learn to walk "the walk" upright. Listen I hear rustling leaves on branches tickle me listen to the smell of free-- "Storms are on the way," she thinks and pulls her collar closed. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (11-27-2003 04:30 AM).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I lose regret walking spot to spot in street . . . I hear rustling leaves on branches tickle me listen to the smell of free-- ..... splendid writing... regards to you sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the ending lines...  |
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Blush Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 56Ky |
And the old saying goes Loved this one I haven't been by in awhile sighs I posted one earlier Do come see me still sorta new here Happy Thanksgiving Susan~~~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"Listen I hear rustling leaves on branches tickle me listen to the smell of free--" Yes...love the fragrance of this...smile Happy Thanksgiving, Karen... Love you much, lady...  When the power of love overcomes the |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, There are always storms, but for today have a wonderful holiday.  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"Listen I hear rustling leaves on branches tickle me listen to the smell of free--" nice...h |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
You get best of show I think! I think I think...at least I thought so...anyway... ...I think I'll have more herbed stuffing with coconut creme gravy... *grin* |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
head down contemplating cracks how absurd it all must be still I tred them carefully-- m'mama's back, already bent. Good Lord yes . . . and just maybe . . . this storm isnt so bad *smile* Love You Lady xxoo |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Great one Karen, always a storm a coming. Jason |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Inversion, K, doesn't suit you  The rest does though...  K |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Yay! Oh Karen, I love the storm in this, sweet friend, doesn't sound like it's worth it to run away but much more worth embracing the storm, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Fantastic, as always. I love it Take care, you. Kielo Wisdom outweighs any wealth |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
One must always look out for those crack eh? Deep and intriguing write Ser. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You brought my mind to the carefully stepped freedoms that we all take for granted...when in our minds we might be captive. Great Write. TD |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen...I avoided those crakes for a long time, and then I realized my mother was gone. Strange, the things that we believe we have control over. Wonderful writing, as always! Hugs! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Listen I hear rustling leaves on branches tickle me listen to the smell of free-- Karen, I LOVE that part!! Hugs Ethel |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
big heart hugs and thanks, especially Martie, for listening to my rambles. This was inspired in part by some stormy weather, and by a loved one's insistance on dying. Martie? You are so right my friend. Life or death--it's a gift for that to be a conscious decision. Thank you all, and yes, most especially Martie, for her wisdom. thank you |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Look out, look in. It's a balance and we need honesty and clarity to do either. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Art is the way to the absolute and to the essence of human life. The aim of art is not the one-sided promotion of spirit, souls, and senses, but the opening of all human capacities -- thought, feeling, will -- to the life rhythm of the world of nature. So will the voiceless voice be heard and the self brought into harmony with it. Artistic skill, therefore, does not mean artistic perfection. It remains rather a continuing medium of reflection of some step in psychic development, the perfection of which is not to be found in shape or form, but must radiate from the human soul." The Tao of Jeet Kune Do, by Bruce Lee "we all shine on..." Instant Karma, by John Lennon Thanks again all, for reading. Special people, all of you. |
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