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Serra_Avatar
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0 posted 2004-01-11 10:22 PM

                    -A women’s heart-

     To see without seeing is to truly see the beauty in a life. Thus, to be blind and helpless is bearable as long I can speak with the heart, to the heart, unknown to carnality. To know a women’s heart is to know more than lewdness when gazing upon her, for beauty begotten of the heart is more beautiful than beauty begotten of the skin.

I wrote this my sophomore year of Highschool. A girl I started talking to inspire it. Shes a very beautiful girl; overwhelming beautiful. Sometimes the guys she came across expressed there appreciation in a less than polite manner.Without internal beauty doesn't the external seem less and less significant? What is beauty without the heart to give it strength?

Mistletoe Angel

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1 posted 2004-01-11 10:50 PM

(smiles) Oh Serra, I absolutely agree with you and all those who half-heartedly or with no heart at all see the beauty that rests within your heart, tears, laughter and smiles from inside have much to learn of the wisdom you have written in this gorgeous debut! You have the beauty in you, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Serra, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Serra_Avatar
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2 posted 2004-01-11 10:55 PM

Thank you very much.

Its hard to show these things. Kids are cruel. I've been called name and critized for the way I see girls. Just because I'm a guy doesn't mean I have to be like all the rest of them.

froggy
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3 posted 2004-01-11 10:59 PM

Very beautiful.

I enjoyed reading this.

:-)

ambrish
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4 posted 2004-01-11 11:18 PM

for beauty begotten of the heart is more beautiful than beauty begotten of the skin.

true and beautiful poem.

Martie

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5 posted 2004-01-11 11:55 PM

Serra...A good way to look at anyone, man or woman, is to see past skin, to within. Welcome to Passions.

Serra_Avatar
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6 posted 2004-01-12 12:21 PM

True-that Martie. I'm happy to be here.

Greeneyes

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7 posted 2004-01-12 12:50 PM

Hi, and Welcome to Passions. We are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

Wonderful first post …..I hope you will enjoy your time here….

please check your email for a special greeting

Kindly~

Greeneyes~

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

Serra_Avatar
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8 posted 2004-01-12 12:56 PM

o0o0o0o, thats look nice. Its nice to finally have a place where I can put some of my things up. can't wait tell my 50th post

passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-01-12 02:24 AM

Welcome to Passions

Suetang
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10 posted 2004-01-12 03:43 PM

Hello Ron

Welcome to Passions! Your words are so very true and thank you for sharing with us. I'll look forward to reading more.

"The best and most beautiful
things in the world
cannot be seen
or even touched.
They must be felt with the heart."

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Nightshade

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just out of reach

11 posted 2004-01-12 04:14 PM

Welcome to Passions !
Enjoyed your first post.
Have fun here !
Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4

Marge Tindal

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12 posted 2004-01-12 04:49 PM

Ron~
Welcome to the circle of friendship and poets~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

vandana

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13 posted 2004-01-12 04:50 PM

welcome to passions

thank you for sharing with us

Aimster
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14 posted 2004-01-12 04:51 PM

very beautiful first post...
i love the view from which you
see things...sad that more don't.
welcome to Passions!!

Take care.
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Sadelite
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15 posted 2004-01-12 04:56 PM

Serra_Avatar,
Wonderfully thought and expressed. Will you run for office?
Sadelite

JamesMichael
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16 posted 2004-01-12 07:02 PM

Absolutely...James

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

17 posted 2004-01-12 07:16 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I very much enjoyed your first post.
I look forward to reading more from you.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Serra_Avatar
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since 2004-01-11

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18 posted 2004-01-12 08:06 PM

Thanks for the welcome.

This is a good place for me to learn. I've already seen so many different styles of writting.

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