Open Poetry #30 |
A women's heart... |
Serra_Avatar Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 58 |
-A women’s heart- To see without seeing is to truly see the beauty in a life. Thus, to be blind and helpless is bearable as long I can speak with the heart, to the heart, unknown to carnality. To know a women’s heart is to know more than lewdness when gazing upon her, for beauty begotten of the heart is more beautiful than beauty begotten of the skin. I wrote this my sophomore year of Highschool. A girl I started talking to inspire it. Shes a very beautiful girl; overwhelming beautiful. Sometimes the guys she came across expressed there appreciation in a less than polite manner.Without internal beauty doesn't the external seem less and less significant? What is beauty without the heart to give it strength? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Serra, I absolutely agree with you and all those who half-heartedly or with no heart at all see the beauty that rests within your heart, tears, laughter and smiles from inside have much to learn of the wisdom you have written in this gorgeous debut! You have the beauty in you, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Serra, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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Serra_Avatar Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 58 |
Thank you very much. Its hard to show these things. Kids are cruel. I've been called name and critized for the way I see girls. Just because I'm a guy doesn't mean I have to be like all the rest of them. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Very beautiful. I enjoyed reading this. :-) |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
for beauty begotten of the heart is more beautiful than beauty begotten of the skin. true and beautiful poem. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serra...A good way to look at anyone, man or woman, is to see past skin, to within. Welcome to Passions. |
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Serra_Avatar Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 58 |
True-that Martie. I'm happy to be here. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hi, and Welcome to Passions. We are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family…. Wonderful first post …..I hope you will enjoy your time here…. please check your email for a special greeting Kindly~ Greeneyes~ ~*~ |
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Serra_Avatar Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 58 |
o0o0o0o, thats look nice. Its nice to finally have a place where I can put some of my things up. can't wait tell my 50th post |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Ron Welcome to Passions! Your words are so very true and thank you for sharing with us. I'll look forward to reading more. "The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched. They must be felt with the heart." Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions ! Enjoyed your first post. Have fun here ! Chris "When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ron~ Welcome to the circle of friendship and poets~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions thank you for sharing with us |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
very beautiful first post... i love the view from which you see things...sad that more don't. welcome to Passions!! Take care. Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Serra_Avatar, Wonderfully thought and expressed. Will you run for office? Sadelite |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Absolutely...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I very much enjoyed your first post. I look forward to reading more from you. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Serra_Avatar Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 58 |
Thanks for the welcome. This is a good place for me to learn. I've already seen so many different styles of writting. |
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