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Open Poetry #30

Upon Waiting For Spring

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

0 posted 2004-01-11 05:47 PM

Outside the snow gently falls aimously,
I smile with anticipation of things to come.

Soon Spring will be here with lawns coming
alive with green.

Flowers will be blooming, trees covered with leaves.

Sound of birds singing, frogs croaking
fill the air with music,
the bees hum along.

A sign Spring has arrived.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2004-01-12 04:20 PM

I like your words

They are unpretensious they are clean words depicting with a simplicity

Their aim is what I like

Dave

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2004-01-12 04:27 PM

froggy,
I agree with Dave. In this poem, you took me without push through the beauty of the changing seasons. Very pretty!

Sadelite

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

3 posted 2004-01-13 11:16 AM

Thank-you Dave and Sadie for the wonderful comment.
I am waiting ever so patiently for Spring
to see the first flower bloom.

:-)

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

4 posted 2004-01-18 06:56 AM

And I cannot wait!

McLean

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2004-01-18 07:42 AM

very nice froggy....:-)

Love that spring music...

enjoyed...
________ice
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J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

6 posted 2004-01-18 07:46 AM

it makes me want to look forward to a beautiful tomorrow.

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