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UniqueFreak
Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 62
Scotland

0 posted 2004-01-11 05:28 PM

If ever you doubt this world, and your heart bares not the sorrow
I’ll try my best to remind you, that there will always be tomorrow
But if you still cant face the day, and tomorrow seems far away
Don’t give up hope or fight, just listen as I say…

Tomorrow is a gift, and it has been given to you.
You must now decide, what you will do.
Return this gift, give up the fight?
Or take it and embrace it with all your might?

If ever you doubt this world, and the pain flows through your tears,
I'll try my best to find the words that will banish all your fears.
But if ever you feel discouraged, and life’s struggles get too much,
Never underestimate, the strength of Faiths tender touch.

If ever you doubt this world, and you feel like it’s the end
I’ll try my best to make you see, on me you can depend.
But if ever that’s no enough, and you need another way
Don’t give up hope or fight, just listen as I say…

You'll make it through the rain,
with your strength, faith and courage.
You'll make it through the pain,
And then all your dreams will flourish

So take this poem, and let me say
That I’m here for you in every way
I may be far, but the distance is near
Because you in my heart, don’t you fear.

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2004-01-11 05:34 PM

I like your idealism. It's been a while...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-01-11 05:36 PM

Unique,
This is unique an excellent write.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2004-01-11 05:37 PM

welcome to passions

enjoyed

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-01-11 09:13 PM

I've written this as I feel I read your words

Please write and write

Your words have quality, your feelings have depth and everyone has a toe to dip in the water

Dave

UniqueFreak
Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 62
Scotland

5 posted 2004-01-12 11:05 AM

thank you guys! much appreciated! ur kind words are very encouraging!

Stephanie

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-01-13 03:14 AM

absolutely beautiful!

UniqueFreak
Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 62
Scotland

7 posted 2004-01-13 07:46 AM

thanks PS, ur poems r very beautiful too!

Stephanie

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

8 posted 2004-01-13 09:00 AM

Hi there Stephanie and welcome to Passions. This is a very nice poem. I like the subject matter and ythe way you presented your thoughts. Very well done. Looking forward to seeing some more of your work and glad you stopped in an joined the family. Your buddy - Kevin.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

ambrya_nell
Junior Member

since 2004-01-11

Posts 28
Ohio

9 posted 2004-01-14 12:59 PM

this is just what I needed to read right now... thanx you so much.. this is so beautiful...

Serra_Avatar
Member

since 2004-01-11

Posts 58

10 posted 2004-01-14 01:05 AM

If your poem where a bird it'd fly beautifully.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

11 posted 2004-01-14 01:17 AM

A thoughtful message you share here!

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