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Open Poetry #30

Dawn

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2004-01-11 02:46 PM

Dawn has broken
the morning birds are singing;
please don't run off yet-
the full moon still lingers
as if to lengthen our night.

~choshi

[This message has been edited by choshi (01-11-2004 03:51 PM).]

wordwizard
Member

since 2003-09-08

Posts 483
on the way to next world

1 posted 2004-01-11 02:58 PM

Interesting way of expressing the lingering effects of the night before

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-01-11 05:15 PM

A moment capture that often leaves us with a vision

Dave

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-01-11 05:33 PM

choshi
Just keep writing, LOL.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2004-01-11 05:42 PM

enjoyed

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2004-01-11 10:11 PM

what a moon
waiting up all night just to greet me come
the morning

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