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Youngatheart
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0 posted 2004-01-10 08:50 PM



The small,roly-poly puppy frolics behind the old weathered farmhouse.
Playfully he trips over his stubby paws as he turns circles in the long thin grass.
Leaving Mamma to tend the sheep, he tumbles and falls flat at the foot of the front porch.
Looking up with his little pink tongue dangling out of his tiny mouth, he lazily looks around the farmyard to see if he is alone.
Bored and lonely, the puppy makes his way up the monstrous steps.
Finally reaching the top, he takes another long look around the farmyard.
Seeing no one he plops down laying his golden head on his dirty little paws.
His eyes start to close and he lets out a deep sigh.
He falls asleep with no worries on his mind, no cares in his heart.

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Balladeer
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1 posted 2004-01-10 09:22 PM


I love any puppy poem and this one is excellent!

You sure you're not talking about the farmer's son??


Youngatheart
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2 posted 2004-01-10 09:25 PM


Thank you, Balladeer.
Do you like kitty poems or do you kick kitties?
Hmmmm...the farmer's son.....

LngJhnAg
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3 posted 2004-01-19 05:41 PM


It's harder to kick a puppy than a kitty.  Nicely written poem, Youngster.
Youngatheart
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4 posted 2004-01-19 06:08 PM


Thank you, LJA. I know you would not kick either....Youngster  
iliana
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5 posted 2004-01-19 06:17 PM


So cute!  That definitely was a puppy!  So cute!  
DavePage
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6 posted 2004-01-19 06:33 PM


Luvly

Enjoyed

Dave

Kristin Eve
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7 posted 2004-01-19 06:51 PM


aww... puppys are so sweet!
and this poem is great...
but we musn't forget that Kittens
are just as adorable,
and should NEVER be kicked.

well... never hard, anyway

"By the time you finish reading this...
You will have finished readding this"

Bonnie j
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8 posted 2004-01-19 07:10 PM


Oh sweet babies they are so cute and cuddly.
Right now I have two bunnies that come and visit. Today the little white one heard the bag I have for carrots and she hopped up the steps to get her reward. She seems to be most tame and not afraid. The little boy is more careful, But he loves his carrots also.
Love your poem.
Bon-Bon

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