Open Poetry #30 |
truth revealed |
chrissydome Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 73germany |
if you've never felt the snow melt on your skin and have never kissed a dragonfly's wing if you've never burned your face on a star never choked on a chocolate bar if you never heard the voice of the sea never felt like finding the key if you never smelled the grass turn green you can't understand what i have seen cause when i lay down on a meadow field all my skins and tears revealed when i reach down to the core i can see an open door if this shallow smile is all that's in your heart if your soul has never been torn apart if you never cried out in dispair and never inhaled raspberry air if you never felt that fire in your eyes if you never stumbled by surprise if you never smiled at a new day you won't understand what i have to say cause when i lay down on a meadow field all my skins and tears revealed when i reach down to the core i just know what friends are for turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
cause when i lay down on a meadow field all my skins and tears revealed when i reach down to the core i just know what friends are for Chrissy, I enjoyed reading this. Hugs Ethel |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
To say I couldn't enthrall myself in your words would be a lie. Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes! a great write! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OMG!!! This is beautiful! ~Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I understand what you have to say .... and you said it very beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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