Open Poetry #30 |
The Ache of Dreaming Fingers |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
To desire...sightless before you. My fingers ache in their description. Such things are simply too much for the senses. And belong only to the briefness of a dream. To desire...I close my eyes to the day of your beauty. Night is falling. And my fingers ache to know you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Night is falling. And my fingers ache to know you." Perfect Eric! Beautiful. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
*sigh* into my personal favorites library |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A very beautiful and sensual write, Eric. Hugs Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Enjoyed the read. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ericc - aching is good, knowing is better. Nice thoughts in a nice write... BC |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric..as always, you make it sound SO good! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
**mouth hanging open** |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Eric There was so much beauty within your words which I enjoyed immensely. "If I never met him I would have dreamed him into being" Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Like sunbeams your fingers reach into the night sky to caress and touch the moon if only for a moment ... just to start the dream that will linger till dawn. Stirring beauty, dear Eric! I love you. Margherita |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Hot stuff -- well done sir! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, yes! *S* This is a sensual beauty. *S* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Dear One... Your perception of love and beauty is only diminished by your personal radiance that shines through each and every word you share with us here. We are truly blessed. Thank you for all that you are! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Eric , sensuous desires so beautifully expressed , loved the title too Hope |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Do NOT take aspirin for that ache! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Eric, this is amazing.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is so beautifully sensual, sweet friend, may you always see he daylight when you close your eyes and feel love in every heartbeat, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
nice |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Eric... You write the most impassioned works I have ever read. Excellent. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ericc -- wow... this was outstanding! |
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