Open Poetry #30 |
A Wall of Words |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
A Wall of Words My paintings ply a wall of hope As Fragile as an interlope Some in dabbled hews of flight And some in symbols black and white. They fly within the Internet And visions of the mind in set Upon electrics magic beam Feathered birds within a dream And though I seem to fly a goal It is a phantom of my soul Carried on the wind of dust Cresting in a breeze of crust And by the code of one and aught Within the enzyme we have wrought Are the changes meant to be Within our set of destiny And in this tie of common core Lies the door of evermore. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling. Ok, 'fess up. Did you in your wildest dreams when you were 25 [just yesterday] truly believe you would ever see the wonder of the Internet? Thank you for this, m'friend. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Only in my dreams my love. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sy darling man I’m so rarely in the forums these days, or if I am, I’m in and out again very quickly. Still I had to stop by and read and reply to your wonderful poem, as always its excellent darling heart, I love it utterly, utterly, utterly. You really are a fine writer and this is exceptionally good, wonderful YOU are a superb writer There’s a poet some do read Whose touch is hope’s truest seed His words spread a ray of light With magic hand he soothes my sight And when I think life is dark When my world turns coldly stark He flashes across my mind Like a whisper of hope’s anodyne The touch that he writes here Sends away the shame of fear The dark recedes, fades away And I return to see a bright new day Love and warm stuff Big hugs Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha May you have many bright new days, thank you |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
We are so fortunate that the internet exists. Without it we would never share in your words and images Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio You are a beautiful butterfly. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I am so grateful for all of my teensy-weensy friends who fit inside my 12" monitor! It's true, the best gifts come in small packages! Beautiful poem, Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise Thank you dear. Hugs |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Your morning words fly about me like snowflakes Seymour. Wonderful. Where is my sister with the tea? Blueberry muffins are ready! hugs, Chris "When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Blueberry muffins and tea will be fine. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
"My paintings ply a wall of hope As Fragile as an interlope Some in dabbled hews of flight And some in symbols black and white." You are nothing less than the greatest artist. Marsha said in her words what i would say if i could. You are very much appreciated! Sadelite |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sadelite And your comment are just as much appreciated. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I once saw some of your paintings in the background of a photo posted when Elizabeth Santos and Pepper were visiting you and Isabel ... that IS a wall of GREAT hope~ You are a true artist~ Lovely are your words on this blustery day~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful piece! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are a love. Hugs Passing, Thank you for the wonderful. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Fabulous writing here Seymour, so much enjoyed. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Seymour Tabin../\..very good.your poems make me smile..enjoyed..thanks.. ../\..Spiros ----------------calm------- |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And though I seem to fly a goal It is a phantom of my soul So cute. Your words are always so deeply meaningful. Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suetang Thank you for the read and reply. Spiros, Always enjoy your replies. Margherita And your words are always so sweet. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"And by the code of one and aught Within the enzyme we have wrought Are the changes meant to be Within our set of destiny And in this tie of common core Lies the door of evermore." Sey, I believe you are absolutely right! This was beautiful, as always. |
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ambrya_nell Junior Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 28Ohio |
beautiful... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Thank you dear. ambrya, Thank you for the beautiful. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Seymour...WELL DONE SIR to you Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paul, My humble thanks sir. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I would love to see your paintings... but I'm captivated enough by the pictures that include them that you and Isabel might want to make sure I never enter... for fear I won't leave. *G* This is lovely, my friend. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern You're welcome anytime. |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Another fine work Seymoure. It was a truly great piece of fine art . Well done, I've enjoyed and admired your great writes. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ravenwolfvoyager I thank you so much. |
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