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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2004-01-09 09:29 PM


“FOR HARMONY AGAIN”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
When loneliness once touches a gentle heart,
and romance takes wing on the breeze,
treasures are lost from deep within,
for darkness shows through the chemise…

Another is then sought of close to cherish,
to give of inner wants, to receive in return,
of the singing of songs and writing of poetry,
for one special, for someone again to yearn…

Once a rose is smelled and without thorns,
and the cherry blossoms bloom in spring,
sometimes showers will fall upon one lost,
for harmony again will be in the offering…
~~~~

© Copyright 2004 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Youngatheart
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1 posted 2004-01-09 09:35 PM


VERY nice....
DavePage
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2 posted 2004-01-09 09:36 PM


Like and understand

Dave

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3 posted 2004-01-09 09:40 PM



Once a rose is smelled and without thorns,
and the cherry blossoms bloom in spring,
sometimes showers will fall upon one lost,
for harmony again will be in the offering…
~~~~

harmony again, for those that want to still sing a lovesong.......very nice bill

Brad_Smith
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4 posted 2004-01-09 09:40 PM


beautiful, Bill
Martie
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5 posted 2004-01-09 11:20 PM


Bill...A sweet understanding.  Hugs!
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6 posted 2004-01-10 04:55 AM


indeed

just beautiful

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7 posted 2004-01-10 09:53 AM


Yes...beautiful.

Eric

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8 posted 2004-01-10 10:38 AM


Bill, may you find harmony & peace this new year! Lovely. hugs, Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4



    

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9 posted 2004-01-10 11:27 AM


Bill,

   Your poem was so well thought and well expressed.  Enjoyed.
                 Sadelite

My favorite writing from your gentle heart:

    "When loneliness once touches a gentle heart,
     and romance takes wing on the breeze,
     treasures are lost from deep within"

I like the way you implied there could be a happier ending later, too.  

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10 posted 2004-01-10 06:44 PM




(smiles) Oh Bill, this is lovely, sweet friend, I am so happy to be back and reading your poetry, yay! (big angel hugs) May the love always overshadow the loneliness in you with rainbows, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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11 posted 2004-01-10 06:49 PM


Just beautiful Bill...
Much enjoyed.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Margherita
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12 posted 2004-01-10 06:53 PM


Your beautiful words, dear Bill, make me want to write something right now ...
Inspiring.
Love, Margherita


Ivy Rose
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13 posted 2004-01-11 02:47 PM


Bill...It's been awhile; but I drop in from time to time to see if a new poem is posted by you. This one is one of deep yearning for that which was lost; and yet sings of hope for that which may come your way, again.

***Ivy Rose  

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14 posted 2004-01-12 01:04 AM


there is so much offered here, harmony and love....should always go together....hugsss


Lauren~

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

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