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Open Poetry #30

Opening Lines

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-01-09 07:29 PM

Opening Lines

Your list is succinct
Of demands and demons
My response compact
~~~
I love you
Copyright Kkh 1/9/04

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-01-09 07:41 PM

Smiling.
Liking this...
very much.

Brad_Smith
Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 70
Dallas, Texas

2 posted 2004-01-09 07:42 PM

lol. why do guys seem to forget the most beautiful words when stumbling for the right thing to say? this made me smile

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-01-09 08:31 PM

And no doubt
To the point.

To misquote an English author

YOu are like a pin Sir
But have neither it's point
Not it's price

Like your words

Dave

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-01-09 08:35 PM

Kathleen~
Short with lots of punch~
Love it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2004-01-09 09:11 PM

ThisDiamond - yes, this is nice...

BC

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