Soliloquy for a sodden day

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Open Poetry #30

Soliloquy for a sodden day

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-01-09 06:58 PM

Caressed from the East
By God’s immortal feast
Sky
My sweet refrain
To a softer song
Amidst
Rain
Silhouetting my countenance
Future
Glory
A dream away
From this

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

1 posted 2004-01-09 08:48 PM

very nice

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-01-09 08:57 PM

"A dream away from this"

Enjoyed the closing, it brought me right back to the beginning.
TD

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-01-09 09:05 PM

I admit my guilt and plead for mercy.

Caught out

Dave

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2004-01-09 09:36 PM

takes the childs ditty, "rain, rain, go away", to the nth,,,I like
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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