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"Twins" |
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Brad_Smith Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 70Dallas, Texas |
How can I forget when its all around Above I see and in poetry it surrounds There a Sky here a sky painted in colors that fly The Scottish Isle Marked the farthest North I ventured in quest Thru green lush marsh was a sky never harsh in the Western Highland Hills Upon the clickity clack on the railroad track every curve was pure delight A new scene of beauty rare a glimpse I saw but not a stare the pace quickened as the fog thickened to the port of Malaig I did not stop there Oh but a Fairy I did see to take me as far as time would allow past a lighthouse beakon and a cold grey sea In the distance an image a darkened mountain appeared to beckon a salty fountain I took but a few steps to touch the shore to capture photos and wanting more Framed on the shore a reflected me there in the distance a solemn tree but surrounded on the foothills yellow forgetmenots color instilled A glimpse of the Isle could not compare to the presence of a soul that feels so near I touched the Isle first then met her eyes Twin beauties of course mimic mirrored Skyes |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I like the write. I have to say I found it slightly heavy going but I think these words need to be read and re-read. It wasn't easy for it to sit on the mind and command the mind to tongue. Dave |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
must say,,,seeing the name Brad and twins in the same area,,,made a private joke run amuck thru my mind,,,,,still laughing,,,,however,,your words painted a picture that were vivid, and real,,,,good write Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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