Open Poetry #30 |
Her "Joe" |
Brad_Smith Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 70Dallas, Texas |
Once love has made it's claim in cute drunken playful game we tickle to joy and I melt to her whim Music and rhythm set the stage for friends and lovers found each in the page Teach me your smile all I desire my trust and love I shall submit Claim what has always been yours of first time can still be pure still to be given seed take my heart in poetic need Satin vision soft and demure Hearts fused in a dance that cures A bond unbroken we could not dismiss Make real Take heart I submit to my lover's kiss A start in words unspoken A look A smile never apart the woman that giggles, in the shopping cart |
||
© Copyright 2004 Kenneth Bradley Smith - All Rights Reserved | |||
Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
wonderful |
||
Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
this is excellent. I love the flow. Here and there, and you are all over, but you never lose it. I love that. |
||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty neat flow to this |
||
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love this! Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |