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Brad_Smith
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since 2004-01-09

Posts 70
Dallas, Texas

0 posted 2004-01-09 03:26 AM

God has made a map
in the stars
of love and words
found from afar

A presence in spirit heart and mind
knowing not her plan wishes or path to go
I wait and yet wonder if thats hHis will

We speak in song
We speak in lyrics
A desire to sing
Shy in the shadows
We sing to each other

Singing in the car
Singing in the car
music devine

Angels in voice
love in our hesitancy

so cute
God's grace

a smile
a tear
goofy anxiousness
and a ticklish cheer

playful two
shall they begin anew???

"Hello Dolly"

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-01-09 03:39 AM

Really liked this! Very sweet and light! Welcome to Passions!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-01-09 04:57 AM

Welcome to Passions!

good first post!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-01-09 07:13 AM

"Hello, Brad, well hello, Brad! It's so nice..." now you have me smiling. Great way to start my day.

Welcome to Passions!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Brad_Smith
Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 70
Dallas, Texas

4 posted 2004-01-09 07:14 AM

thank you sunshine. your warm welcome brightened mine and iliana too.

Michelle_loves_Mike

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since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2004-01-09 08:01 AM

"so cute
God's grace"
cute,,,,,,,hmmmmmm
Welcome to Passions
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Brad_Smith
Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 70
Dallas, Texas

6 posted 2004-01-09 08:33 AM

I wanted to let the moderators know and others that I changed my name from martiniat8 because it doesnt feel right to me anymore. I would rather use my real name. Didnt want to cause any confusion but that martiniat8 has negative connotations to it. Id rather sign my work with my real name. I hope yall understand and thanks. I shouldve probably asked, but I didnt think to. Thank you all you have been very warm understanding and supportive.
Hugs,
Brad

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-01-09 09:16 AM

Hello Brad and...yes....ths is great!

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2004-01-09 09:21 AM

Hi, and Welcome to Passions. We are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

again

beautiful song Brad......

Kindly

Greeneyes~

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

Brad_Smith
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since 2004-01-09

Posts 70
Dallas, Texas

9 posted 2004-01-09 09:26 AM

song? i didnt think of it as a song but i reckon it could be.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2004-01-09 09:45 AM

I like this poem and your honesty very much. Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2004-01-09 09:52 AM

Angels in voice
love in our hesitancy

love that second line, Brad

*s
M

Brad_Smith
Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 70
Dallas, Texas

12 posted 2004-01-09 10:02 AM

thanks Chris, I believe there should be more honesty especially when it comes to poetry. Using my real name is something I shouldve used from the start. I trully think its important to reveal one's true self and receive the praise and spoils in one's true identity. If we cant then maybe we shouldnt post it.

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

13 posted 2004-01-09 10:07 AM

Brad - I appreciate your honesty. You are just like me. You are far more noble than those two scalawags Balladeer or Toerag, who hide behind silly names and use humor to villify other wonderful, honest people like you. We honest people must stick together against the Dark Forces those two evil-doers represent.

Your friend,

LngJhnAg

Brad_Smith
Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 70
Dallas, Texas

14 posted 2004-01-09 10:11 AM

lol. am I? then why dont yall use your real names or the name of the author that writes their stuff? at times it seems as though they are character names in a story.

Brad_Smith
Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 70
Dallas, Texas

15 posted 2004-01-09 10:13 AM

oh and who do they represent btw? i must say their slapstick is of a familiar sort.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

16 posted 2004-01-09 10:27 AM

Brad, welcome again. I also appreciate your honesty.
And, I do love your poetry. It seems to be written
from your heart. Thanks for sharing it with us.
I'm glad that you joined us here at Passions In Poetry.

Hugs

Ethel

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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17 posted 2004-01-12 11:31 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is such a romantic and beautiful debut, sweet friend, God is the navigator and map-designer and connect our destinies to the stars, that shine just like the freckles on a child's skin! God Bless You, I wish you happiness forever, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kenneth, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kenneth, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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