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"Colors"
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"Colors" |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Color me a painted sky brilliant radiant clear and blue Color me clouds soft silent in peaceful drifting hues Color me a scene of friends I miss of fervant smiles caressed with a kiss Color me my father warm and giant jovial laughter that shakes the tyrants Color me a dance with joy and freedom a soul feeding rhythm holding my partner carefree and bonded Color me a smile anxious at my door nervous hopeful with joy that makes the heart soar Color me a soul kindred and sweet to release all my joy, love, and excitement Color me a new memory laying beneath the stars embracing for warmth wrapped in the passion of mars Paint this scene for your love's sake a mutual feeling beautiful beginings together can make... WHOLE |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
Paint this scene for your love's sake a mutual feeling beautiful beginings together can make... a beautiful poem, i would have liked to write it myself. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
martiniat8, this is a very beautiful poem. I loved the ending too.... Paint this scene for your love's sake a mutual feeling beautiful beginings together can make... WHOLE Hugs  Ethel |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
thank yall, but ya can call me brad  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
martiniat8, color me glad I read your poem -- it's lovely! |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
written with the brush of a true artist,,,,,very good Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Brad_Smith Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 70Dallas, Texas |
Just wanted everyone who reads this know that I dropped the name martiniat8 to be replaced with real name Brad_Smith. Id like this piece and a few others under my new name and have martiniat8 erased. |
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harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
a great read and write...I love it.. always Harash |
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