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martiniat8
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0 posted 2004-01-09 12:37 PM



Color me a painted sky
brilliant radiant clear and blue

Color me clouds
soft silent in peaceful drifting hues

Color me a scene
of friends I miss
of fervant smiles
caressed with a kiss

Color me my father
warm and giant
jovial laughter
that shakes the tyrants

Color me a dance
with joy and freedom
a soul feeding rhythm
holding my partner
carefree and bonded

Color me a smile
anxious at my door
nervous hopeful with joy
that makes the heart soar

Color me a soul
kindred and sweet
to release all my joy, love, and excitement

Color me a new memory
laying beneath the stars
embracing for warmth
wrapped in the passion of mars

Paint this scene for your love's sake
a mutual feeling
beautiful beginings together
can make...

WHOLE

© Copyright 2004 Kenneth Bradley Smith - All Rights Reserved
ambrish
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since 2003-03-27
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1 posted 2004-01-09 12:55 PM


Paint this scene for your love's sake
a mutual feeling
beautiful beginings together
can make...

   a beautiful poem, i would have liked to write it myself.

garysgirl
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2 posted 2004-01-09 01:05 AM


martiniat8, this is a very beautiful poem.
I loved the ending too....

Paint this scene for your love's sake
a mutual feeling
beautiful beginings together
can make...

WHOLE


Hugs  
Ethel


martiniat8
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3 posted 2004-01-09 01:08 AM


thank yall, but ya can call me brad
iliana
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4 posted 2004-01-09 02:54 AM


martiniat8, color me glad I read your poem -- it's lovely!
Michelle_loves_Mike
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5 posted 2004-01-09 11:56 PM


written with the brush of a true artist,,,,,very good
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Brad_Smith
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since 2004-01-09
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Dallas, Texas
6 posted 2004-01-10 12:00 PM


Just wanted everyone who reads this know that I dropped the name martiniat8 to be replaced with real name Brad_Smith. Id like this piece and a few others under my new name and have martiniat8 erased.
harash
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7 posted 2004-01-10 02:15 AM


a great read and write...I love it..

always Harash

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