Open Poetry #30 |
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If These Were The Last Words |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
If These Were The Last Words If I were never to see you again I would never eat chocolate again Because the taste would remind me of you If I were never to smell you again I would never smell a flower again Because the fragrance would remind me of you If I were never to hold you again I would never feel the heat of the sun again Because its warmth would remind me of you If I were never to make love to you again I would never know intimacy again Because that closeness would remind me of you If I were never to watch you sleep again My heart would not smile again Because love would remind me of you If we were never to have met I would return to this lifetime again and again Because without you.....there are no words. Marcel |
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wickedbeautifulpoetry Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 84Indiana, USA |
absolutely breathtaking poem sincere and beautiful... great write. ![]() -katie- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awwww...this is just perfect |
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Michelle_loves_Mike![]() ![]()
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Oh,,Marcel,, this is just so right,,,,,perfect,,,,,making an E card right away,, thank you , much enjoyed Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a lovely write |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhMarcel~ This one touches soooooo tenderly~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Marcel, this is lovely. Quite lovely. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
marcel Enjoyed the read. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Marcel, a thoughtful write. Thank you. |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
Marcel.... I REALLY LIKE THIS. You expressed yourself in such a special way. I am going to keep this!! Y. |
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