Open Poetry #30 |
Peace of mind |
Jessie Carstein Junior Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 41 |
The silence that flows in me, Like the silver stream, Courses through my breaths, So I fall into a dream. I stand in a palace, Drawn of golden light, Bathed by the aura of the moon, Here on this peaceful night. I stand on a red carpet, Gilded crown upon my head, Glistening by the candelabra, Thinking of my soft warm bed. I stand in the centre of this castle, Surround by maids and hands, I curtsy and smile in greeting, At all the strangers from foreign lands. I lie on a cold cold bed, Seeping painful tears, My arm strokes your absent body, Absent for all these years. Oft I dream of that glowing place, That castle in the sky, But instead I have this cold bed, And alone I lie. Who knows what is peace of mind? Where is the path to glory? When can I live again? Will this ever be a happy story? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I lie on a cold cold bed, Seeping painful tears, My arm strokes your absent body, Absent for all these years" Loved that stanza, loved the form... Welcome to Passions! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Jessie Carstein Junior Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 41 |
Thank you very much. This poem was pretty much about fairytales and the dreams they provide. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hi, and Welcome to Passions. We are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family…. this is lovely .... please check your email for a special greeting Kindly Greeneyes~ ~~**~~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jessie, this is a sad poem, but it is written so beautifully. It sounds like it is written from the heart. Thanks for sharing with us. And welcome to Passions. Hugs Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) This is a sad but beautiful debut, sweet friend, I understand just how you feel as I'm waiting too patiently for my dream to come true but know as long as you follow your heart you're destined to find all the true happiness your heart deserves, yay, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Jessie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jessie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jessie, Welcome to Passions! I hope that our little world offers you everything your poetic heart desires! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jessie~ Welcome to Passions ... LOVE this fairytale of a penning~ You'll find LOTS of believers among the keepers of this circle of friendship~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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