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Open Poetry #30
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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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0 posted 2004-01-08 03:47 PM

In a mass of freedom
I echoed boundary
Hemming myself in with vision

Why should I be so cursed
In ignorance I had no boundaries
Only the chance to go forward

Now I have learnt
I have only boundaries
To stop me
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wintertao
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since 2003-11-17
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1 posted 2004-01-08 03:49 PM

very creative, as always enjoyed mucho mas

*bow*

thanks, for sharing your words here
cusick
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since 2003-07-27
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2 posted 2004-01-08 04:21 PM

*Clapping* Just when you think you are free you find your'e not. Maggie
DavePage
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3 posted 2004-01-18 04:49 PM

Thanks

dave
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