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Michelle_loves_Mike
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0 posted 2004-01-08 11:41 AM



IM FINE


Keep it all in,,,hide it
face the world
smile to fake
I'm fine...
Pain rips from flesh to soul
words of reality
..so cold
I'm fine.....
darkness covers the world
Light leaves me behind
reaching out for saving
Pulling back once close
I'm fine.....
alone in the misery...
so deep
Lookig up to see the bottom
smile to fake,,,

...I'm fine

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

© Copyright 2004 Michelle Albright - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-08 11:56 AM


Michelle~
A soulful emote ... well done~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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2 posted 2004-01-08 12:28 PM


know one too many likes this...

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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3 posted 2004-01-08 12:43 PM



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4 posted 2004-01-08 12:58 PM


Gee...how this sounds like myself...
always putting on a good front.
Well done.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

harash
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5 posted 2004-01-08 01:01 PM


A lovely thought...

always harash

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6 posted 2004-01-08 01:04 PM


'tis one of those cliches, yes?  I enjoyed reading this.

McLean

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7 posted 2004-01-08 03:01 PM


thank you all for the feedback,,,,,,,always a pleasure
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

GG
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8 posted 2004-01-08 03:20 PM


so painful...
but I've been this, too.
Felt it...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Susan Caldwell
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9 posted 2004-01-08 04:50 PM


"Lookig up to see the bottom
smile to fake,,,

...I'm fine"


Sometimes we get in the habit of saying "I'm fine" because its easier...

Enjoyed.

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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10 posted 2004-01-08 05:47 PM


nicely done

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

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11 posted 2004-01-08 05:50 PM


yes, 'I'm fine' is the biggest lie some people ever tell.  Come to think, I've told it myself a few times.  This is well-expressed.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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12 posted 2004-01-09 11:26 PM


Like the way you used "I'm fine"...nice writing...James
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13 posted 2004-01-10 01:39 AM


Just the way it is sometimes, Michele.
A good write.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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14 posted 2004-01-10 11:40 PM


thanx again for all the encouragement,,,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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