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Michelle_loves_Mike

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since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2004-01-08 11:41 AM

IM FINE

Keep it all in,,,hide it
face the world
smile to fake
I'm fine...
Pain rips from flesh to soul
words of reality
..so cold
I'm fine.....
darkness covers the world
Light leaves me behind
reaching out for saving
Pulling back once close
I'm fine.....
alone in the misery...
so deep
Lookig up to see the bottom
smile to fake,,,

...I'm fine

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-01-08 11:56 AM

Michelle~
A soulful emote ... well done~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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KristieSue

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since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

2 posted 2004-01-08 12:28 PM

know one too many likes this...

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-01-08 12:43 PM

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-01-08 12:58 PM

Gee...how this sounds like myself...
always putting on a good front.
Well done.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

harash
Member

since 2003-12-27

Posts 99
India

5 posted 2004-01-08 01:01 PM

A lovely thought...

always harash

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

6 posted 2004-01-08 01:04 PM

'tis one of those cliches, yes? I enjoyed reading this.

McLean

Michelle_loves_Mike

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since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2004-01-08 03:01 PM

thank you all for the feedback,,,,,,,always a pleasure
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

8 posted 2004-01-08 03:20 PM

so painful...
but I've been this, too.
Felt it...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2004-01-08 04:50 PM

"Lookig up to see the bottom
smile to fake,,,

...I'm fine"

Sometimes we get in the habit of saying "I'm fine" because its easier...

Enjoyed.

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

10 posted 2004-01-08 05:47 PM

nicely done

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

11 posted 2004-01-08 05:50 PM

yes, 'I'm fine' is the biggest lie some people ever tell. Come to think, I've told it myself a few times. This is well-expressed.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2004-01-09 11:26 PM

Like the way you used "I'm fine"...nice writing...James

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

13 posted 2004-01-10 01:39 AM

Just the way it is sometimes, Michele.
A good write.

Hugs

Ethel

Michelle_loves_Mike

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since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

14 posted 2004-01-10 11:40 PM

thanx again for all the encouragement,,,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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