Open Poetry #30 |
Bend Over |
KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
It's really amazing how people kiss your feet no matter what you say no matter what you do I find it kind of funny you expect that of me to bow down and worship to take all that you give You are not my father just an arrogant man throwing weight around taking all you can So move on your way leave me in the past Remember me always as the one you couldn't win Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Kristie sue, I hope this is just a poem and that noone is doing you that way. It's a powerful poem, well-written. Hugs Ethel |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
intereseting |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
A poem affirming inner strength -- good one! |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
very good "talk to the hand" poem! strength is always a plus Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KristieSue~ LOVE YOUR TITLE ... enjoyed the read~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wow...felt this..no one should have to feel bullied or overpowered by another, even family. Good title and write M |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Ethel~ seems to be the way of my life, but it has made me strong :-) Thanks... Brad~ if you only knew how interesting *rolling eyes* Iliana & Michelle~ Thanks. It's a new-found strength, but better late than never. "talk to the hand" is putting it TOO nicely :-) Marge~ Me too LOL thank you Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is sad but full of strength too You Go Girlfriend! love you |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
ditto Dixie :-) Thanks Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Way to go, Kristie! That's telling old Toerag a thing aor two! Good for you! Of course, every other woman has said the same thing, but you had to wake up some time! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
LOL Mike...thanks. I would never say such things to Toerag though *wink* Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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