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kayjay
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0 posted 2004-01-08 09:18 AM


Snowflakes dance on air
Wind choreographs their steps
Sun remains hidden
Rain interferes with ballet
Confusion reigns in the sky



© Copyright 2004 Ken Julkowski - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-08 09:23 AM


Love this Ken..
So good to see your words here more often.
And...of course you know how I love snow!
Tanka very much!
~Smiles & warm hugs, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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2 posted 2004-01-08 09:29 AM



Sounds like a snowglobe world to me...
Enjoyed this very much, Ken!

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3 posted 2004-01-08 09:29 AM


kayjay
In other words it looks like rain, enjoyed.

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4 posted 2004-01-08 10:15 AM


Oh, I love this one Ken!! hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

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5 posted 2004-01-08 10:43 AM


This is so beautiful, Ken.
I really enjoyed reading.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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6 posted 2004-01-08 10:44 AM


Nice one!
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7 posted 2004-01-08 01:09 PM


what a stage!

great writing!

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8 posted 2004-01-08 02:56 PM


I have watched this for two days, first snow now puddles!  Nicely done kayjay.
kayjay
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9 posted 2004-01-08 03:06 PM


My thanks to those who come to greet
Like E and 'Shine and others sweet.
And 'shade and 'shadow add their note
so nicely praising what I wrote.
For Ethel, Seymour, Iliana
I get to write just how I wanna
Mysteria so kindly put
her views upon this track I've  cut.

To all who deal with winter's woes
I hope you stay very safe and warm.
Mysteria, you must have very similar weather.  Ours will pass soon.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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