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I Can Miss You Any Night
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I Can Miss You Any Night |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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A dragon flew tonight while I was driving home; it circled underneath a moon so full within my sight and wove a joyful dance upon the wind. It is the Wolf Moon in the sky looking down upon us all and yet I do not feel like howling in the ancient prayerful way; though I felt you call my name at dawn. Oh the night is bitter cold and almost bright as day. You are ten thousand miles away, so far that it is Summer where you will sleep this night; I think I'll send my dragon down to tuck your dreams in tight. ©2004 by icebox |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Exquisite! I really like your writing style. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox You sing a sweet lullaby! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
not for me...but tonight i steal it...i sure could use it...smooch...h |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
*fans self* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IceBox~ Oh, how much this one likes me~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I to, was looking at the full moon last night... Yummy as usual Icy one.  "if you won't let me fall for you |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
I liked this alot...I think the first half of the poem is the best...the ending could be better imo, then it would be a 10. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
 Sigh. Wish I was inspiring poetry today. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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