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allamericanjoe
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since 2003-10-02
Posts 116
Iredell county, NC

0 posted 2004-01-07 10:47 PM



Don't know what to say.
Don't know what to do.
What more proof can I offer,
That my love is true?

I've told you I love you.
I've shown you with deeds.
I've put to the side,
My own wants and needs.

I wait and I wonder.
I hope and believe.
Or do I lie to myself,
And refuse to percieve?

What is the hang up?
What is the confusion?
Do you really love me,
Or am I disillusioned?

Will we ever be together?
Will we ever be one?
Will my questions be answered,
Before my mind is undone?

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time"  ~James taylor~

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-01-07 11:15 PM


Hi Joe! Maybe you should just come right out and ask her some of these questions.
Excellent write m'friend.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Michelle_loves_Mike
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since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2004-01-08 12:23 PM


good write,,,,,,I'm sure we've asked ourselves those questions a million times or more,,,,take care
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-01-08 02:23 AM


Really well expressed and I enjoyed reading this!   Thanks..........jo
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