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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2004-01-07 10:27 PM


The silent winter has been long upon these hearts
White out seasons through, it's clench was strong
As fate drew us, walking every distant mile to the curb
I am with you now, and remain the whispered prayer that holds you

Just as the snow, I fall gently to the low and wandered regions
Waking sleeping legions that have graced your dreams through mine
Underscoring this adoring, perseverance that is more than known before
I am with you now, as every heartbeat bears the promise of this eager kiss

Unrushed the river calms, ever watchful holding on in upturned palms
And open arms that quiver to surround your every sound
As darkness in not absent of the light, only sleepless in anticipations rite
For you glow within the pleasure of a warm and willing need

And I am with you now,
Seeking only sunshine for this love's eternal seed

Copyright Kkh 1/7/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-07 10:51 PM


Diamond girl, this is very beautiful writing with excellent thoughts
jaicie114
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2 posted 2004-01-08 12:26 PM


Beautiful, TD...thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

garysgirl
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3 posted 2004-01-08 10:46 AM


Unrushed the river calms, ever watchful holding on in upturned palms
And open arms that quiver to surround your every sound
As darkness in not absent of the light, only sleepless in anticipations rite
For you glow within the pleasure of a warm and willing need

And I am with you now,
Seeking only sunshine for this love's eternal seed


Awwwww, Kathleen, this is so beautiful.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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4 posted 2004-01-08 10:58 AM


And I am with you now,
Seeking only sunshine for this love's eternal seed



Never too early, or late, to be planting good seeds...

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2004-01-08 11:15 AM


Kathleen~
Your name speaks QUALITY~

'I am with you now, and remain the whispered prayer that holds you'

Sooooooooo very, very lovely is this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

iliana
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6 posted 2004-01-08 11:21 AM


"Just as the snow, I fall gently to the low and wandered regions
Waking sleeping legions that have graced your dreams through mine
Underscoring this adoring, perseverance that is more than known before
I am with you now, as every heartbeat bears the promise of this eager kiss"

You've written this exquisitely!

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2004-01-08 11:59 AM


Kathleen~
I came back for a second read ... and remembered that I wanted to tell you just how much I enjoyed the internal rhymes~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

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8 posted 2004-01-08 12:59 PM


you are one of the fine romantics on this site

thank you

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