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misao
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 50


0 posted 2004-01-07 10:08 PM


Saying those words
it hurt me to say
it taught me one thing
no other words will bring you back
you left that day
toke the keys to my heat and locked me away


You broke my heart
like it was glass
the pain felt natural
I was hurt, so I hid
your gentle eyes
have gone morbid


how could a sweet thing like you
do such a thing
saying I love you
is all you have to do
to make me stay
and be with you.



© Copyright 2004 Ms Kitsune - All Rights Reserved
exhale
Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada
1 posted 2004-01-07 10:25 PM


god that was so painful
but so amazing
your amazingly talented

lilibeelee
Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143

2 posted 2004-01-07 10:30 PM


Very well written good write.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2004-01-07 11:13 PM


Nice writing...James
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