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Open Poetry #30

Poison

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

0 posted 2004-01-07 10:08 AM

Things unfinished
Drive me nuts
Take my minutes
Waste my guts
Kill my spirit
Drain my soul
Blanch my color
Halve my whole
Chill my daylight
Haunt my nights
Show all my wrongs
Hide my rights
Step on my toes
Break my wings
Smash my courage
Squash my dreams

*****

January 7, 2004
Mclean

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2004-01-07 11:07 AM

makes me think of Alice Cooper,,,,
Michelle

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2004-01-07 01:52 PM

McLean~
Yes ... I understand this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-01-07 02:02 PM

It speaks of a fear of failure that would eventually lead to control freakdom where everything must be 2000% correct.

It leads very nicely to a conclusion.

Dave

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