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Open Poetry #30

Battle of the day

Melodious_silence
Junior Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 37

0 posted 2004-01-06 11:59 PM

The time of routine
The cold walks to Hell
The same setting made of obscene
Backs me up against a tree like William Tell

Storm of Weapons Clashing in the wind
A bitter defeat in the beginning
It started as an end
I fell and died, in the Battle of Odin

The bell rapes my ears
The tree of soles drags me down the hall
Everyday is what I fear
Before I climb out of slumber, prepare myself to fall.

Weapons of Earth!
All will fear!
I bring them to my hearth
Soon they will all disappear!

Slaughter dew
Pasted on the chairs
Grinning at my world made of new
They continue to die in pairs

Stories tell my rhyme
All having a brutal end
A moment held in time
To Hell and back again

The cycle takes it's dreary toll
I am bored with all that is dead
It is time, i want to go home
I am tired, and I have bled

It has been a war
It is taking place the Tempest Season
Tomorrow again, I will have to endure
The killings for everything but reason.

I clad my way home
The Helm of Sudri has grown dark
The silent sea foams
Another journey I must embark

Forever in a day
The night is gone
It went by without say
and tomorrow will be just as long

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-01-07 01:22 AM

You said a bunch here -- the humdrum of unsatisfying work, for one, I presume, as the least of the statements you made here. And I think there is some truth to forever being in a day. Interesting poem and I enjoyed reading it.

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-01-07 11:37 AM

very much liked,,,,,,If you ever listen to GWAR,,,,,you know the song it reminds me of,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-01-07 12:56 PM

emotion-packed

I know the feeling!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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4 posted 2004-01-07 12:57 PM

oh by the way...Welcome to Passions! Looking forward to more of your writing!

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