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disc22
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0 posted 2003-11-26 09:01 AM


A calloused tree barked "Stand tall and defiant",
Ugly and natural, my head hanged soft.
A tearful sewer pipe is ran through here,
Rusted into dills, not a vein clean.

But the hills are enough to keep me sane;
Retaining water in them grass and blade,
The hazed yellow sun and the bright fine rain;
From the sea, in the sky, and made;

Not influenced or honed by any court,
Miles away from any laws that are wrote,
Satisfied simply with its own leaf and sap,
An isolate of the world, with no map.

[This message has been edited by disc22 (11-26-2003 09:31 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-11-26 09:05 AM


The hazed yellow sun and the bright fine rain;  From the sea, in the sky, and made;''''

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Wow what a grand first post....Welcome to Passions....We are glad you are here....  

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you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
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Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-11-26 09:11 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very very much enjoyed your entrance post.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Happy Thanksgiving America! ~

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-11-26 09:38 AM



Welcome to Passions!
I, too, am going to enjoy
reading your works.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

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4 posted 2003-11-26 10:46 AM


Welcome! I enjoyed this unique first post, and hope to see more of your imaginative  POV.
Happy Passionate Posting!

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5 posted 2003-11-27 05:40 PM






(smiles) I love the imagery and wit flowing inthis whimsical debut, sweet friend, the suede caressed this canvas with glitter, yay, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and...Happy Thanksgiving to you and all your loved ones! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Sadelite
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6 posted 2003-11-27 05:52 PM


disc22,

   I had to check in after seeing your unique title.   Glad I did...  I especially liked this part.   Welcome to Passions.
I think you will really like it.   Again, I enjoyed your first post and am looking forward to reading more.

A calloused tree barked "Stand tall and defiant",
Ugly and natural, my head hanged soft.

                          Sadelite

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displaced
7 posted 2003-11-29 01:58 PM


I missed your entrance!

Welcome to Passions Looking forward to more!

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