Open Poetry #30 |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Bird song fell; Chimes On summer breeze (From summer trees) Sifting, mixed With love-music scents Of Potpourri Four-o'clocks, For-get-me-nots, And the silent blue-horns Of morning glories. * Buzzing electric, Sound of drunk bees Imbibing free nectar Above two alone, On a blanket Half naked, Half cold Half on fire. * The air is dough-thick, And need is the yeast That swells their desire. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ice, You got some real catchy phrases here, enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
aha, you have to be careful with that double acting yeast enjoyable imagery |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Enjoyed this ice!! Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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disc22 New Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 8lancs, england |
great great imagery, it read like a running machine on light jog setting like it a lot |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Thanks Seymour, glad you enjoyed the "phrases"....:-) * Midnightsun Right you are, the double acting kind can make "bread" rise quickly...:-) * Nightshade Thanks for commenting, glad you enjoyed......:-) * disc22 A poetic reply, thanks for reading.....:-) * _______ice ><> |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Love it :-) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now this...I like |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ice....Sounds like the ingredients to make love with. Enjoyed this beautiful recipe! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh yes...very much enjoyed this!! Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
There'll be something in the oven, all right... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Loved this |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ooops! I must have forgotten that essential ingredient in the love recipe ~ yeast! I never have been very good at following recipes! I usually just make up my own and 'wing' it, or just 'fly' by the seat of my vestments! lol EA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ford, this is delightful for the holiday season, sweet friend, I love to make gingerbread with my mother during this time of year and I love learning her recipes so I can pass these on to a family in the future! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Froggy Thank you for "loving it".....:-) Shadows .....glad you like it...:-) Martie This recipe comes out delicious if prepared properly....:-) Enchantress I am happy you "enjoyed this"....:-) Ratleader Your comment here sounds like the beginning line of a new poem....."There'll be something in the oven"......"-) KoKo Glad you "loved this".....:-) Earth Angel flying by the seat of your vestmens is also a good way to cook.....:-) Noah/mistletoe Love your responses......:-) |
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