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WildPoet
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since 2003-11-10

Posts 205
California

0 posted 2004-01-05 09:46 PM

She's Fifty-five
In her prime
In all these years
She's done her time

Known great pain
Given sweet joy
She knows a man
From a boy

Learned from life
She'll give pleasure
The strength of her love
Is her golden treasure

So know you men
What you pass by
For beauty is found
With the souls eye

WildPoet

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wickedbeautifulpoetry
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since 2004-01-03

Posts 84
Indiana, USA

1 posted 2004-01-05 09:51 PM

I really like this one..
Clever and a great write.

-katie-

lovejunkie
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since 2003-12-31

Posts 93
Indiana

2 posted 2004-01-05 09:55 PM

it's very wise and catchy. I like it.

-Steph

WildPoet
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since 2003-11-10

Posts 205
California

3 posted 2004-01-05 09:55 PM

Thanks Wicked!
I wrote it for a dear friend!

WildPoet

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WildPoet
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since 2003-11-10

Posts 205
California

4 posted 2004-01-05 09:57 PM

Thanks Steph!

Surprising what a person will come up with in the shower!

WildPoet

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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2004-01-05 10:06 PM

This could be about so many women but certainly holds true for one I know well. I really enjoyed the message sent in this poem a lot.

Carpe' Diem

WildPoet
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since 2003-11-10

Posts 205
California

6 posted 2004-01-05 10:14 PM

Thanks Sharon!

I'm sure you know whom it's for, but you're right, it can apply to many beautiful souls here, Even one who went to Woodstock!

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Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

7 posted 2004-01-05 10:59 PM

Too often someone judges us on a preconceived notion of what age is all about. Just because someone is older (not old) doesn't mean they don't have the same thoughts, feelings and desires. I personally feel like I'm about 17!!

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

8 posted 2004-01-06 01:14 AM

This is one cool write, oh wild one. Cool and catchy and right on. ~K~

WildPoet
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since 2003-11-10

Posts 205
California

9 posted 2004-01-06 01:15 AM

I'm not writting anything for a 17 year old! I don't want the jail time!

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Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

10 posted 2004-01-06 01:22 AM

Ha Ha! Very wise...anyway, you made lotsa ladies happy with this one... ~K~

WildPoet
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since 2003-11-10

Posts 205
California

11 posted 2004-01-06 01:30 AM

Thanks ~K~ !

It all came from the heart and the shower, since I'm not much of a singer, I do some of my best thinking in there!...Alright!,Knock off the laughing!

WildPoet

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Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

12 posted 2004-01-06 01:42 AM

yeahhhhh, I read that earlier remark about the shower and I was just going to behave myself and keep my comments to myself! But it appears that's where you do some of your best work... tee hee ~K~

WildPoet
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since 2003-11-10

Posts 205
California

13 posted 2004-01-06 02:04 AM

Maybe I can sell an instructional video on my shower techniques?
                      "Poetry thru Water"
                     A Cascade of Feelings

WildPoet

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

14 posted 2004-01-06 02:18 AM

Yikes!!!! Somebody pull the plug!!!!!

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