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Open Poetry #30

I want my star

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

0 posted 2004-01-05 05:00 PM

Before the holidays
Before Christmas time
I saw ads where you could buy a star
So I thought about if for awhile
And figured I was finally ready
Its a big step in a mans life
To get his first star
So I placed my order and waited
Everyday I checked outside my door
Then one day an envelope came
And inside it said you now own:
Star # BEZ267889
Nebula Gargatua X12 Galaxy
Needless to say I was pissed off
So I sent them an e-mail inquiry
They said ah but you do own it
Which of course is not true at all
All I have is a piece of paper
I want my star damn it
SOB's
I want my star

wickedbeautifulpoetry
Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 84
Indiana, USA

1 posted 2004-01-05 05:05 PM

I really like this..
Original and unexpected..
But creative and very nice.

-katie-

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-01-05 06:24 PM

Funny write on a very romantic topic "to own a star" ..... now walk out and gaze into the night sky ... all this beauty displayed there just for you. Wow.
Love, Margherita

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-01-07 06:24 PM

I just want to see the door you put it on.

Dave

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