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Seduction Of A Winter Dance
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Seduction Of A Winter Dance |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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  Seduction Of A Winter Dance Again she called to me. Pursing her succulent lips in such a cold yet beckoning kiss, I had no choice but to go to her and hold her. All the while she curves herself just so into an arched begging scream that somehow always leaves me begging for more. Under misted breath, I whispered, “There is never enough.” So intent was she that I bear witness to this birthing, this flamboyant display of immense crystal beauty, She began to weep virgin tears of joy. Somehow she seems surprised at my coming. Do I not always answer her beckoning call? As they silently fell, not one similar to the other, each sparkled like a priceless jewel. In a moment’s touch I knew with certainty no one would ever own this treasure but her. I gasped, welcoming her shivers. They gave me an unexplained sense of lightness and joy that is strangely, so very warming as it hits the core of my wanting and waiting soul. In between each cool sigh, where her crescendo builds quivering to climax, only she can orchestrate the finale or encore this frigid winter stage bears witness to. My breath rises in swirled, chilled vapours. I begin to heave cool misted sighs, while all the while, a trail of salty sweat under layers of protection drips as I try to run in a child-like, exhilarated joy. I find myself wiping away tears of wonder and gratitude with the same black glove I used to try and catch a miracle, a snowflake. A small prayer escapes me, as I stand here alone, being seduced by winter's dance. Art: Linda Bergkvist "Winter's Dance" (my favorite digital artist) http://www.furiae.com/ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (01-05-2004 05:26 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my Sharon...this is simply breathtaking! Exquisite writing my friend..and I love the artwork. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy Lee~ In the midst of winter.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, dear... I got seduced right along with you... hope you don't mind? *S* This is just beautiful. *S* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thank you ladies, the snow is incredible here. You are overwhelmed in its beauty I tell ya. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (01-05-2004 05:17 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful! I'm seduced too by the winter dance and you have created an enchanted atmosphere. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
What a wonderful write Mysteria, you have a wonderful imagination with words and this poem is captivating beyond measure. Thank you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sharon, breathtakingly beautiful!!! That's all I can think of to say.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am so glad you enjoyed this one about my love of winter and snow. I could not think of a better artist to explain it to you than Linda, the truly is an exception artist. Thanks again, and I want to welcome our newest member as well and thank you kindly. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I find myself wiping away tears of wonder and gratitude with the same black glove I used to try and catch a miracle, a snowflake. You are just too lovely for words Mysteria, geez I want to dance like that!!! Just beautiful, you!! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Mysteria, you make this desert dweller want to put on her boots and find a snowbank. Beautiful, simply beautiful... |
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alan6501 Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 89PA |
Oh my gosh!! I thought that this was about a guy being seduced by a woman! LOL!! This poem is amazing. I'm so dense that I didn't get that it was snow. I just assumed that you were a guy writing this. I hope this doesn't offend you. Anyway, excusing the mix-up, this is still an amazingly written poem. |
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alan6501 Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 89PA |
Now I see your pic, you're definitely not a man!!! LOL! sorry again. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Bluesy ~ Coming from you I can only take this as the sincerest form of compliment. poetdevine ~ I am but a short trip away, so is the snow alan6501 ~ I sure am not offended, you actually made my day! I tend to write in all sexes actually, and it's fun! Thanks again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I would not mind a bit of snow, but people here in Florida don't know how to drive in good weather...I'm sure I'd get wrecked...lol beautiful writing! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sharon - As much as I hate winter, I can relate to this poem very well. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Well I would dance with you anytime in this loveliness.   |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A lace & grace filled piece, Mysteria. Thank you! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 You have to love snow to live where I love to live! This picture was taken out my back door with a zoom lense toward Grouse Mountain. I am delighted you shared snowflakes with me |
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