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"your star"
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"your star" |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
i want you to have your star i want you to have it its yours yours alone but i can go no further i can go no further reach out with your spirit you can feel my weakness im so cold im so cold you must be bold reach out one call one letter i am here i am here take your star it is here the roux is thru |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
i am here i am here take your star it is here lovely, liked it. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
many promise the moon and stars,,,,,,offering one star,,,,,,is like that one rose,,,,it makes it more real and lovely,,than when bunched together with others,,,,,,lovely write Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hi neighbor, well sort of. I like the concept of being a star.  |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
ya iliana, thats why I wrote it, I named a star after domeone, but I havent given it to her yet. |
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