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EverRuss
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since 2003-12-31
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0 posted 2004-01-04 06:12 PM



Here I stand in the rain
Pouring Im soaked in mother natures tears
she is crying for us
Do I run to you just yet
or do I stay here for now, the world I know
You know the answer
And I hate it
I go back to the world I know
I want your world

Russell

© Copyright 2004 Russell J - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-01-04 06:59 PM


Lovely pondering!
Love, Margherita

wickedbeautifulpoetry
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since 2004-01-03
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2 posted 2004-01-04 07:01 PM


I like this poem a lot.

-katie-

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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3 posted 2004-01-04 08:09 PM


Your open lines are wonderful...the whole poem is beautiful. TD
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-01-05 03:44 AM


nicely done

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (01-05-2004 03:45 AM).]

ambrish
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since 2003-03-27
Posts 257
India
5 posted 2004-01-05 05:50 AM


go back to the world I know
I want your world
        it stirs me.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2004-01-06 03:32 AM


Nice writing...James
Foxyoasis
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7 posted 2004-01-06 05:33 AM


very good
LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
8 posted 2004-01-06 07:41 AM


Don't do this, Russ.  Don't leave me here wondering what you are going to do!  lol - Nicely written!
lovejunkie
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since 2003-12-31
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9 posted 2004-01-06 05:07 PM


It's hard to know what to do sometimes. Even if you see the truth, you ignore it bcuz it's not what you want.

"All you need is love..." -The Beatles

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