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EverRuss Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 66Indiana |
Here I stand in the rain Pouring Im soaked in mother natures tears she is crying for us Do I run to you just yet or do I stay here for now, the world I know You know the answer And I hate it I go back to the world I know I want your world Russell |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Lovely pondering! Love, Margherita  |
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wickedbeautifulpoetry Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 84Indiana, USA |
I like this poem a lot. -katie- |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Your open lines are wonderful...the whole poem is beautiful. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done [This message has been edited by passing shadows (01-05-2004 03:45 AM).] |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
go back to the world I know I want your world it stirs me. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very good |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Don't do this, Russ. Don't leave me here wondering what you are going to do! lol - Nicely written! |
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lovejunkie Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 93Indiana |
It's hard to know what to do sometimes. Even if you see the truth, you ignore it bcuz it's not what you want. "All you need is love..." -The Beatles |
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