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Open Poetry #30

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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2003-11-26 01:18 AM

photo by: anje&jan ladage

[This message has been edited by Snow (11-26-2003 01:19 AM).]

WildPoet
Member

since 2003-11-10

Posts 205
California

1 posted 2003-11-26 03:09 AM

Whoa! Very Good, Snow!

WildPoet

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2003-11-26 08:18 PM

WildPoet, thank you very much !!
snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

3 posted 2003-12-18 03:13 PM

This has a nice hook to it. It rolls through the mind nicely; well done.

Daniel van Vliet
Member

since 2001-08-31

Posts 80

4 posted 2003-12-18 04:42 PM

slain..... a deep write, brillant!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2003-12-18 04:47 PM

I loved this and the entire presentation was incredible Snow. I have been to your site and read there a lot not realizing you were a member here. Great job both this and your site. Happy Holidays to you!

Let there be peace on earth,
and let it begin with me.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

6 posted 2003-12-18 06:07 PM

A poet's poem.
Nice.

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