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harash
Member

since 2003-12-27

Posts 99
India

0 posted 2004-01-04 06:09 AM

Frustrated Woman

She would want to hold
The whole of the scene,
Where She had
Ever been.
Always would fight,
Blunt to misbehave,
Petty issues
The way She’d keen.
But always would happen
Something to see,
Beastly be treated
And be insulted free.
She would not bear,
The failures and pains
Would plan to attack
Another to drain.
Wind seemed not favorable
Could not make her
Plans stable.
She met the fate,
The ultimate Gate.
She lost her way
In the vicious circle
To stay.
For all her evils
And dirty plays,
This frustrated woman
Must have to pay.
This frustrated woman
Must have to pay.

~~~~*HARASH MAHAJAN*~~~~

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2004-01-04 06:30 AM

Sounds like a person I know that does not know how to concede when they are wrong, they think that continuing the struggle will somehow make them right.....common in people with enlarged egos....enjoyed the read...:-)
______ice
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Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-01-04 08:31 AM

I've been there,,,luckily, by the grace of a great man,,I've grown up,,,,good write
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2004-01-04 09:50 AM

quote:
She would want to hold
The whole of the scene,
Where She had
Ever been.

je comprends, yes, I do understand.
And? I've been that person more than once in my life, but hopefully have evolved.
You could of course, change the gender, and recognize a universal 'unisex' character flaw.
I enjoyed the read.

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

4 posted 2004-01-04 10:01 AM

Very powerful...you set my mind to thinking this morning.

Patricia

harash
Member

since 2003-12-27

Posts 99
India

5 posted 2004-01-06 12:20 PM

You all are so sweet...the real readers of poetry...I love you all....

Harash

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2004-01-07 07:09 PM

This could be me on a very bad day!
But I won't go there again, it accomplishes nothing.

Enjoyed this side of a woman you wrote~

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