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mara marti
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0 posted 2004-01-03 09:47 PM



Running in circles
but running alone
hiding from someone
from whom, I don't know
Crying my last tears
Crying for what?!
My heart is so lonely
my soul is so cold.

© Copyright 2004 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2004-01-03 09:49 PM


Hello and welcome to Passions. I hope
that you like it here.
Please check your e-mail for a special greeting.
thanks,
Ethel/garysgirl
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ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2004-01-03 10:06 PM


Welcome to Passions
The journey of self discovery is a process...
I wish you all success.  Enjoy your works.
ThisDiamond

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Gaia
3 posted 2004-01-04 12:42 PM


Welcome to Passions.
If you stick around and read a variety of the passionate poetry at this site, I think you'll find great warmth for those chilled bones.

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-01-04 04:56 AM


ouch, this one hurts...I feel it

Welcome to Passions!

chrissydome
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germany
5 posted 2004-01-04 11:07 AM


welcome to passions!
i know this feeling! warm hug!

turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-01-04 11:13 AM


Morning and welcome to Passions..
where you will never be lonely.
Enjoyed your first post
and I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Hugs & smiles, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2004-01-04 12:13 PM


Marilyn~
A cordial welcome to Passions to you~
I know you'll find us a warm and inspiring circle of friends and poets~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

Ericc
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8 posted 2004-01-04 12:49 PM


Very powerful and full of longing...great poem!

Eric

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