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Startime55
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0 posted 2004-01-03 07:13 PM



Star Touched

The sky turns from grey to velvet black
revealing diamond brilliance flashing
My gaze is drawn to mystical lights
pulling me into a dream of sorts

I soar to the past where love resides
leaving physical body behind
Over mountains, rivers, oceans I fly
seeking the one whose soul touches mine

He must be a man who is star touched
that we may travel the magic road
Our future opens a secret door
into a world visited by few

A place where fairies, wizards and gnomes
play in green forests for miles around
Where we’d run through rolling surf and sand
while mermaid songs serenade the night

We’d breath deeply the fresh ocean air
and embrace as our passions enflame
Such love will weave a world of its own
only for star touched lovers to find

Karen Mc Neil
Jan. 2, 2004


© Copyright 2004 Karen Mc Neil-Tomayer - All Rights Reserved
wintertao
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Okaloosa Island, FL
1 posted 2004-01-03 07:34 PM


very cool !
Magnus
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2 posted 2004-01-03 07:49 PM


Our weaver of magic and spells and mystical
places returns...if but for just a blink of
a starlit eye...

Beautifully written Karen....good to see
ya post one...your words are missed.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2004-01-03 08:31 PM


Was the door green...James
Patricia
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4 posted 2004-01-03 09:09 PM


Very lovely and oh so dreamy.  

Patricia

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