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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2004-01-03 11:22 AM


The darkness draws me,
Falling into the dark sadness of her crying,
I can not help but hold,
Within arms to enfold,
Drowning a stone heart so close to dying,
With tearing is polished
Till last abolished,
Resting with heavy head on chest laying.
Two black pearls draws me.

Gloom


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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2004-01-03 11:50 AM


a tender write, PG

Happy New Year,
M

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-01-03 01:12 PM


Gloom
Interesting write.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-01-03 01:30 PM


kind of sad but beautiful
Sadelite
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4 posted 2004-01-03 01:59 PM


Professor,

   This is a very touching poem, but sad.  I hope that you doing well and that she feels your warmth.
   Take care of yourself.
                     Sadelite

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (01-03-2004 02:10 PM).]

Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
5 posted 2004-01-03 03:52 PM


it was the vision from the
heart that i enjoyed from
this piece.
snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


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