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Open Poetry #30

Two Black Pearls

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2004-01-03 11:22 AM

The darkness draws me,
Falling into the dark sadness of her crying,
I can not help but hold,
Within arms to enfold,
Drowning a stone heart so close to dying,
With tearing is polished
Till last abolished,
Resting with heavy head on chest laying.
Two black pearls draws me.

Gloom

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2004-01-03 11:50 AM

a tender write, PG

Happy New Year,
M

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-01-03 01:12 PM

Gloom
Interesting write.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-01-03 01:30 PM

kind of sad but beautiful

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

4 posted 2004-01-03 01:59 PM

Professor,

   This is a very touching poem, but sad.  I hope that you doing well and that she feels your warmth.
   Take care of yourself.
                     Sadelite

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (01-03-2004 02:10 PM).]

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

5 posted 2004-01-03 03:52 PM

it was the vision from the
heart that i enjoyed from
this piece.
snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

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