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garysgirl
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0 posted 2004-01-03 10:41 AM


From the core of our beings
we feel
Love so devine,  could only be
from God
A true love,  with promises of
endurance

This love,  felt with passion
stirring
Emotions felt strongly,  with
desire
With want and longing we both
share

Desire to please each other in
every way
Physical,  emotional,  sensual
feelings
Stirred within us,  with love
unconditional

Loving,  needing each other
always
Within us,  fire burning,
never-ending
Forever,  a flame burning with desire for
each other

We,  thinking we had lost this,
this feeling
This love we share,  though similar,
different
Like no other love either has ever
experienced

This love that fills every inch of
our bodies
From the very top of,  our heads to
our feet
To the very tips of our
fingers

We feel pleasure,  contentment,
fulfillment
In every fiber of our beings
is love
Physical,  mental,  emotional,
spiritual
Is more than anything we have ever
known before
A love that is beyond understanding
or reason

This awakened love we share....
me for you      you for me........

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-03-2004 10:45 AM).]

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1 posted 2004-01-03 10:58 AM


garysgirl
You say it so beautifully. Wonderfuf write.

garysgirl
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2 posted 2004-01-03 11:04 AM


Thank you, Seymour. I appreciate your kind words.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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3 posted 2004-01-03 01:00 PM


yes quite wonderful write

RE-FUSE-TO COMPLY WE'RE TRYIN TO DO THIS OUR OWN WAY and now I'm watchin the fallen stars surroundin me 15 minutes of fame -SKINLAB-

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4 posted 2004-01-03 01:16 PM


thank you very much, Snow Flake.
Hugs  
Ethel

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5 posted 2004-01-03 02:03 PM


beautiful

having a hard time finding another word for your poetry

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6 posted 2004-01-03 02:05 PM


Dixie, I appreciate that word very much!!
Thank you for reading and replying.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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7 posted 2004-01-11 08:18 PM




(smiles) This made me cry as you describe just the love I dream of sharing with my dream girl in the future, to feel for her not just on the outside but always on the inside as well! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, you and Gary deserve eternal love that I wish for the both of you, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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