Open Poetry #30 |
Feelings Stirring Within.........Part II |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
From the core of our beings we feel Love so devine, could only be from God A true love, with promises of endurance This love, felt with passion stirring Emotions felt strongly, with desire With want and longing we both share Desire to please each other in every way Physical, emotional, sensual feelings Stirred within us, with love unconditional Loving, needing each other always Within us, fire burning, never-ending Forever, a flame burning with desire for each other We, thinking we had lost this, this feeling This love we share, though similar, different Like no other love either has ever experienced This love that fills every inch of our bodies From the very top of, our heads to our feet To the very tips of our fingers We feel pleasure, contentment, fulfillment In every fiber of our beings is love Physical, mental, emotional, spiritual Is more than anything we have ever known before A love that is beyond understanding or reason This awakened love we share.... me for you you for me........ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-03-2004 10:45 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl You say it so beautifully. Wonderfuf write. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Seymour. I appreciate your kind words. Hugs Ethel |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
yes quite wonderful write RE-FUSE-TO COMPLY WE'RE TRYIN TO DO THIS OUR OWN WAY and now I'm watchin the fallen stars surroundin me 15 minutes of fame -SKINLAB- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
thank you very much, Snow Flake. Hugs Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful having a hard time finding another word for your poetry |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie, I appreciate that word very much!! Thank you for reading and replying. Hugs Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This made me cry as you describe just the love I dream of sharing with my dream girl in the future, to feel for her not just on the outside but always on the inside as well! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, you and Gary deserve eternal love that I wish for the both of you, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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