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chrissydome
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0 posted 2004-01-02 02:48 PM


sitting on the floor
tired and cold
tears full of pain
suffocating rain

whisper from above
this must be love
no, it's the tune inside of me
that just set me free
just worte that down to show that there are things in this world that have the power to stop me from crying... :-) hugs!


turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again...

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1 posted 2004-01-02 04:12 PM


Chrissydome, I have unlocked three of your poems that you overposted. So, this one will be locked until tomnorrow. I hope that you understand.
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Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-01-03 11:03 AM


chrissydome,
Good write, enjoyed.

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4 posted 2004-01-03 11:08 AM


I agree, music has the power to unlock your inner spirit and set you free. Good write, friend!
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5 posted 2004-01-03 02:14 PM


nice write
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