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ranidae_poet
Member

since 2003-11-05

Posts 66
Texas,USA

0 posted 2004-01-02 12:14 PM

I am basking
In the newness
With each touch
I am breathless

We are dawning, We are falling
Into each other
With each goodbye
I find myself stalling

In your presence
Each time
I find one more reason
To write yet another rhyme

Each time you kiss me unexpectedly
I fall deeper,
Gripped in all that is you
I am yours, admittedly

Each time your eyes grace me
My heart overflows
And I look away for fear
My feelings will show

Every kiss upon my forehead
Makes me teary
Every day I am without you
I find myself weary

My heart has never known
Such a powerful devotion
Never has body known
Such intense seduction

My soul has never felt
As whole
And I know that I no longer
Have control

As I look out upon my future,
Our future, The serenity,
Is that of such peace
Such utter tranquility

Unaware I am, of how I deserve you
Whatever deed done
Which ever it be

It must have been my shining moment
I am forever grateful that it brought
You to me

[This message has been edited by ranidae_poet (01-02-2004 01:28 PM).]

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2004-01-02 12:16 PM

I know those feelings well, I still haven't figured out what I did right in the scheme of things to deserve my Mikey,,,
wonderful write
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-01-02 12:20 PM

All that comes for me for a title is,

"The Truth, Released!"

Very nice!

ranidae_poet
Member

since 2003-11-05

Posts 66
Texas,USA

3 posted 2004-01-02 12:27 PM

thank you dear...sunshine....you gave me an idea...what about this...soulful release.

There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create.

ranidae_poet
Member

since 2003-11-05

Posts 66
Texas,USA

4 posted 2004-01-02 12:29 PM

and thank you too Michelle...

I m sure you did many wonderful things...to deserve your sweet..

thanks for stopping and taking time to comment.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2004-01-02 12:35 PM

This is very good. It's the way I feel
about my Love, too. Both the title
Karilea suggested and the one you
mentioned sound very good to me.

Hugs

Ethel

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2004-01-02 01:00 PM

Rianda~
A heartfelt penning~

I can only suggest your own thoughts as a title -
In Your Presence ... I Fall Deeper~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

ranidae_poet
Member

since 2003-11-05

Posts 66
Texas,USA

7 posted 2004-01-02 01:31 PM

thanks marge

I appreciate you stopping by...

hugs to you as well..

There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create.

ranidae_poet
Member

since 2003-11-05

Posts 66
Texas,USA

8 posted 2004-01-02 01:33 PM

garysgirl

so glad you can relate....hugs

There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-01-03 03:13 PM

beautiful

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