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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2004-01-02 12:53 PM



I know where I've been
I know where I want to go
Once I had a clear path
And now a wall of reality

I can't see the way out of it
Maybe one doesn't exist
Maybe I'm trapped in this void
Expressed by an over used vocabulary

Tangled in the past
I trip on the lines
Wrapped and cloaked
The blackness on nothing

Heavy the hand that glows
The thicker lies
Thorough life
A pointless end to come
Slow and pause
Hanging and swollen
Just push it through
And keep living

Breath every one
Breathe exhale clicking organism
Moves, eats, wondering, lost......
Dancing sounds in my head
Describing my atmosphere

When it sways
Like they don't care
Comfort, feel comfort in the fact they don't
Just another dose of truth

Heavy the hand that glows
The thicker lies
Thorough life
A pointless end to come
Slow and pause
Hanging and swollen
Just push it through
And keep giving

Tick in seconds
Hours, Years, Life and eons
Farther as waste recycle for the better
Purposes finally met

Watch the change of what you know
Split and different than before
Making the procedures
Pathway forgotten, remainders of memory

Heavy the hand that glows
The thicker lies
Thorough life
A pointless end to come
Slow and pause
Hanging and swollen
Just push it through
And keep living

And keep living

And keep living til the end

Application of knowledge is the basis of ability.

[If I can't have everything well then just give me a taste.]-Trent Reznor

© Copyright 2004 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
Krawdad
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1 posted 2004-01-02 01:01 AM


Life happens while we write

Keep writing

It's all there

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-01-02 02:51 AM


good! i like this!
green_itchy_stuff
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3 posted 2004-01-03 02:55 AM


thanx you two.

GIS

Application of knowledge is the basis of ability.

[If I can't have everything well then just give me a taste.]-Trent Reznor

River
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4 posted 2004-01-05 11:18 PM


=) *hugs* rok on!

     - Bonnie Sue

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

green_itchy_stuff
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5 posted 2004-01-06 09:34 PM


thanx River,  I always like reading your replies.

GIS

Application of knowledge is the basis of ability.

[If I can't have everything well then just give me a taste.]-Trent Reznor

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