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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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trust the fingers beckoning curling hitherhere i need granite underneath belief white blood blithering protest the dates are but the chiseling no one's life is lived this smooth feel the indent ridiculed as palms heavy push the grief not a thing you learn in school-- just how heavy does death weigh? damn you, damn you, anyway why did you leave me so soon? |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karen?...  Love you, sis |
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chrissydome Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 73germany |
so touching! thank you! turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, I know it's not the same but we love ya.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey, K? Now...let's write! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Just amazing, and powerful writing, Miss S. I'm in awe. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dear Karen....  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
It is always too soon to be left behind. There is no magic for this that I have ever found except that which softens anger. The new year can bring many things; I hope it rest gently on your shoulders. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi Serenity...wow. This is quite the piece. Very strong, powerful, images. Well done dear friend. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen?  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, we love you, sweetie......  Ethel |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
could be said of the year, no? nevermore . . . but the new is born of promises |
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